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February 4, 2008
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Entwined in ebony,
As if diminishing into an eternal,
endless abyss of shadows,
That leads me into the depths of everlasting darkness,
Enveloped within the power of supreme darkness,
I seek for abysmal light,
To unseal the path that echoes with whispers,
Detested memories in vast silence,
gradually devoured my sanity,
Like a Dark Angel's shattered wings,
Denying of my heart that leaks black velvet light,
Behold, surrounding my heart with rays of glorious True Light,
Capable to Crush and destroy,
by this small, yet strong light,
Concealed deep beneath my corroded heart,
That bursts pure flares of sacred hallowed light,
Like vivid pedals of rich liquid crystals,
Unfolding among elegance with gleams of endless ruptures,
Glistening misty jets of chaste white radiance,
Consuming the darkness,
Into the infinite oblivion of demise,
From this divine, forceful power of Bliss.
For I am the chosen one,
The one who will fight,
To open the door to the Realm of Light.

Johnny Youssef
Copyright ©2008  Johnny Youssef
My Masterpiece Poem,
Inspired by the game Kingdom Hearts,
I present to you "The Door to the Realm of Light".

(This is the short version of the poem)
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i loved it!! XD
vvmasterdrfan Apr 18, 2009  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
really?! thank you so much it took me so long to write this. its good to know that someone appreciated it ^_^ thanks again!
ur welcome i cant wait til u write more!
vvmasterdrfan Aug 23, 2009  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
i hope i get to! ^_^
vvmasterdrfan Aug 27, 2009  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
vvmasterdrfan Aug 29, 2009  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
:la: yay
twas so gorgoues, inspiration well spent...

I really love the line 'Unfolding among elegance with gleams of endless ruptures' The imgage i get from that is mesmersing (well the one thats in my head anyway)

Brilliantly marvelous!
vvmasterdrfan Feb 24, 2008  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
oOOO goody!! im glad!
thank you so soo much!! ^_^ <3
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